I have kept the same style from the original draft but changed my pictures to more bright and visually appealing images which would actually attract people to buying my newspaper.
I have included the original masthead from my newspaper which makes it seem more professional and links them together well.
Instead of the small paragraph of text about the entertainment section, I have changed it to a short sentence in bold text exclaiming its the "Ultimate guide to entertainment in the south west" which is more eye catching and will attract people more than the paragraph of text which was difficult to read and unconventional.
I have also added the logo so people will immediately associate this poster with our newspaper, the slogan and website is also at the bottom.
I did limited editing to the photos but the one with the sky I edited so it looked like a bright sunny day
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